Mock up contents

Here is my mock up contents template, I feel as though it fits well with the theme of the magazine and does not feel out of place compared to the front cover. There are however a few things that I feel can be improved; such as the unnecessary white space above the main contents which could be improved with either sell lines or another image. Another part that can be improved is the way the pictures are placed, perhaps they could be improved with boarders around them  making it obvious that they are separate images and not part of the same mess of pictures. My focus group which I recently showed a half finished version to liked what I had done and suggested a few other things to improve such as keeping a consistent colour scheme. Their favourite part was banner at the top of the page.